Enchanté
Site Name: Enchanté
Site Owner: Chloe
Date Completed: 02/00/2010
First Thoughts & Layout
At first when I looked at your URL I was going to turn you down right away, I was thinking that your site was
going to be one of those premade ones with glitter on it. I was pleasently suprised when I clicked on your URL.
Although I am not to big of a fan of Webs, only for the fact that you have that stupid bar at the bottom. lol. I
like the layout, it is very summerish and makes me smile when I see it. Although you did not make it, you chose a
very good premade. It is also different than a lot of the premades out there too! Good Job.
Coding & Compatibility
Although you did not code this layout yourself I will still check for issues and browser compatibility.
The css is valid, there isn’t anything that needs changing there. As for the HTML: It is not valid, but since it is not
your coding, I will not go through that with you. But, in the future if you plan on creating your own layouts, you should read
through some XHTML tutorials to get to know how to code. Your site looks great in all browsers.
Content
Book Reviews
You offer book reviews which most people do not. I think it’s great that you offer them. I look forward to seeing more of them. They
are very well written and detailed. I would also suggest maybe creating reviews on movies and other things like that. I bet you would be
very good at it. Other than the book reviews, you don’t really have any other content on your website. That is alright for now, but like I said
maybe add more reviews or other writing content. You love books, so why not write articles?
Girl
This page has a good amount of information on it. I like how you talk about your plans for the future. It tells us what kind of person you are or
aspire to be. 
Affiliates
This page is self explanitory, nothing really to say. 
Tagboard
So, I think I know why you have this on your site…It’s because Webs doesn’t offer comments right? If you ever get an actual subdomain, then you can
install a blogging system which will offer comments on your blogs.
Spelling and Grammar
Overall your spelling and grammar is good. I would assume that is because of the amount of books you read. I think it’s great that you read books!
Girl
On this page:
“Technology could easily be described as my obsesion.” obsesion should be obsession
“Unfortunatly I’m times on how much time I spend online…” Unfortunatly should be Unfortunately
“…cause I’m so obbsessed…” obbsessed should be obsessed
“…being that writing is practicly my second life” practicly should be practically
“…original, quriky, and fun girl.” quriky should be quirky
Affiliates
“…writes with creativity, spunk and maturaty!” maturaty should be maturity
“…writing protfolio…” protfolio should be portfolio
“…and vistior content…” vistior should be visitor
“(and creativily named)” creativily should be creatively
“Sorry, affiliation is my my request early.” – I’m not quite sure what you mean by request early but, you repeated the word my twice.
Book Reviews – Are You there God…
“…get annoyed or frusterated with this thing…” frusterated should be frustrated
“This book is a great realation to what…” realation should be relation
“…Margaret hardley hestitates.” hardley should be hardly and hestitates should be hesitates
“…others start sqealing over him.” sqealing should be squealing
“this isn’t the only awkard…” awkard should be awkward
“The girls are definatly out…” definatly should be definitely
“,puperty altogether, and just the expierences…” puperty should be puberty and expierences should be experiences
“…for and intruging read…” intruging should be intriguing
‘”puberty”?’ The punctuation should be inside the quotation marks
“…all of the members have…” This should be …all the members have…
Final Thoughts and Improvments
I really think you are off to a great start. Just make sure to double check your spelling or run it throught a spell checker. Some browsers have
built in spell checkers. I know that you are only twelve, so your spelling isn’t perfect but it will improve. Your spelling is difinitely better
than others. I hope that you continue with your site and one day create your own layouts.